Então resolvi mandar um e-mail pra minha orientadora agradecendo o apoio dela
Ela revisou meu application e sugeriu que eu mudasse meu vídeo.
As sugestões dela foram essas:
-Começar o vídeo falando: Hello host family
-Colocar musica em portugues ao inves de ingles
-Colocar menos fotos com a sua família
-Tente falar de uma forma mais animada, como se vc estivesse falando com a família.
-Gravar seu vídeo em um lugar claro.
-Colocar musica em portugues ao inves de ingles
-Colocar menos fotos com a sua família
-Tente falar de uma forma mais animada, como se vc estivesse falando com a família.
-Gravar seu vídeo em um lugar claro.
Entãoooo, resolvi escrever um "roteiro" pra me basear quando eu estiver falando.
Eis aqui o bonito :) (?)
Hello host family!
How are you?
I hope you’re doing great!
I’m Isadora
and I’m 18 years old! I’ll complete my 19 in September. I’m making this video
because I would love to know your family and introduce myself!
I live in
Campinas, a big city near to Sao Paulo. As Sao Paulo, Campinas has a lot of
different people and ideas, so I’m used to share and receive other cultures.
I live with
my parents, Carlos and Edmara, and with my young brother, Leonardo. They all
support me to be an Au Pair!
(FOTOS CPS E
FAMILIA)
I’m a very
mature person for my age. That is the principal quality I have and it’s the
quality that everybody admires in me! Besides that, I’m honest, careful,
patient, funny, responsible and I love children! Nowadays, I’m making volunteer
work in a child school. I’m taking care of 18 children who are between 3-4
years old. Sometimes, I take care of younger and older kids!
(FOTOS
CRIANÇAS)
I choose to
be an Au Pair for three reasons:
1st
- I LOVE children and the way we can
learn with them.
2nd
– I would love to share my culture and add knowledge to grow as a person.
3rd
– I want to improve my English and have a great life experience!
Well, I
think that’s it! I hope you’ve liked.
I can’t wait
to know you and go to USA!
I hope we
can have an amazing year and I hope it can happen soon!
Bye bye!
E aii people?! Ta bom assim?
Quando eu gravar meu video, posto aqui :)
beijooos
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